55 Flash Fiction Friday

2008 December 20
by cricket51

I came across a “new to me” meme a few minutes ago and thought I would take the challenge. If you are looking for something quick and fun to write, how about giving 55 Flash Fiction Friday a try?

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   The Christmas Present

Jamie carefully untied the bow and painstakingly loosened each piece of tape on his largest present. He opened the lid and found another wrapped box. He repeated his meticulous unwrapping skills on the next four hidden boxes. In the last box was this note:  ”Wrap these boxes back up and get to bed. Love,Mom”

3 Responses leave one →
  1. 2008 December 20

    Cute, very cute.

  2. 2008 December 20

    You are so good at the flash fiction, Cricket. I loved this!

  3. 2008 December 20

    Hee hee hee. Nicely done.

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